Lentesymposium 2009 (29)

The heart of your writing while apeparing reasonable initially, did not really work very well with me personally after some time. Someplace within the paragraphs you managed to make me a believer but only for a very short while. I still have got a problem with your jumps in logic and one would do nicely to help fill in all those breaks. If you actually can accomplish that, I would surely be fascinated.